Barrie Davenport

How To Use Commas With The Conjunction “As Well As”

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If any topic will cause a collective groan from writers, it’s punctuation. 

Some writers are precise with their commas and other forms of punctuation. 

Yet others scatter em dashes, commas, and full stops like confetti throughout their manuscripts and rely on their editors to sort things out later.

When it comes to punctuation for “as well as,” there seems to be just as much confusion. 

Is there a comma before “as well as”?

What about afterward? And why?

By reading this article, you’ll know exactly what to do when placing commas around “as well as.” 

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Your Step-By-Step Guide To Writing A Story Outline

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Writing a whole novel can seem like such a daunting task. 

But it’s far easier to complete a novel if you break it down. 

Writing a book outline is a really helpful way to break your story down into more manageable parts and to give you a clear guide on where your story is going and what to write next.

Let’s look at how to write a story outline, and we’ll give you some story outline examples to help you get started.

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The Writer’s Handy List Of 111 Negative Adjectives To Describe A Person

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Your antagonist is such a jerk!

You just know your readers will classify this person as one of the worst fictional people ever created.

You’re so proud. 

If you need to describe this person, though, you’re not sure of the best words to use.

Where’s a list of negative adjectives when you need one? 

Look through the generous list below for just the right words.

You’ll know them when you hear them. 

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How To Craft A Love Story Book Title + 63 Title Ideas

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What gets readers’ attention when they’re looking for a new love story to read? 

Of course, there’s the cover to draw them in, but when your readers can only see a small thumbnail of your cover on Amazon or other retailers, all they’ve got to go on is your name, the cover itself, and your book title.

That makes your title really important.

Choose the wrong one, and it’s less likely that your book will be picked up.

Good titles for love stories attract the right audience and help sell the book.

So how do you choose romantic book titles to suit your own stories? 

Read on to discover how to choose your love story book title, our selection of romance book title ideas for inspiration, and how to finalize your book title.

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Is It Wrong To Start A Sentence With Because?

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Can a sentence start with because?

It’s a good question.

And it deserves a clear and well-considered answer. 

If you’re like many of us, your elementary school grammar teachers taught you never to start a sentence with a conjunction. 

Starting a sentence with because comes second nature in everyday speech and informal writing.

It’s less common in more formal writing, but that doesn’t make it wrong. 

So, how do you do this the right way?

And is there a wrong way you should know about?

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7 Tips For Crafting A Poetic And Lyrical Writing Style

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Have you ever had the experience of reading, or even writing, a passage from a book that made your breath catch? 

The kind of writing that had you reading that sentence or paragraph over again and dwelling on the words and how it made you feel? 

It’s the style of writing that stays with you long after you’ve closed the book, leading to the condition known as a book hangover, where you’re still thinking about the last book while trying to get into a new one.

If you can still quote lines from Shakespeare and some of the great poets and writers, even though you read them years ago, you’ve no doubt been captivated by lyrical writing.

But what is lyrical writing, and when does it tip too far into purple prose? 

And how do you consistently create lyrical prose in your own writing?

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Let’s Clear This Up: Should You Underline Or Italicize Book Titles? 

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If your teachers taught you to underline book titles, it probably didn’t make sense to argue. 

Plus, underlining is just easier when you’re writing things out by hand. 

Not so with texting — or when you’re writing a book of your own.

When you reference your sources, do you underline or italicize book titles?

Are novels italicized or underlined?

And does it matter whether a novel or novelette is part of an anthology? 

What are the rules worth remembering? 

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